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Part Three: Research and Argumentation 341 Part Two – Revise Now, write one of the rhetorical appeals ( logos , pathos , or ethos ) on a new post-it note. Exchange with another student. Revise your thesis to appeal predominantly to that rhetorical appeal. Example: Original: Now that it’s November, it’s time to break out the cold weather clothing. When you want to be both warm and also fashionable, a striped wool sweater is the best choice. Revised: With the colder months looming, we are obliged to bundle up. Because they help you maintain consistent and comfortable body temperature, wool sweaters are the best option. Finally, revise your thesis once more by adding a concession statement. Example: Original: With the colder months looming, we are obliged to bundle up. Because they help you maintain consistent and comfortable body temperature, wool sweaters are the best option. Revised: With the colder months looming, we are obliged to bundle up. Even though jackets are better for rain or snow, a sweater is a versatile and functional alternative. Because they help you maintain consistent and comfortable body temperature, wool sweaters are the best option. Guiding Interpretation (Readerly Signposts) In the organizer on the next page, create a signpost for each of the quotes in the left column that reflects the posture in the top row. logos